Feedback for a newcomer, PLEASE

[theyoungking]

I just started rapping a few months ago, I would really appericate some feedback, on the flow/lyrics. I'm mastering the tracks myself so it may not sound as good as possible but I'm more concerned about the flow.
THANKS!

http://www.myspace.com/mrbakerasia

[youngkonvict23]

please just stop rapping, you genuinly suck and im not tryna be mean or just talk shit but u really just cant rap

[theyoungking]

What do u mean, the lyric, flow, voice, sound quality. And no I won't stop rapping, the entire point is so I can improve

[allcapone]

nice lyriks all you need to do is flow with the beat.keep doing wat u r doing.

[theyoungking]

Thanks bro, I need the feedback